Emberpaw-Thunderclan medicine cat apprentice!

Name: Emberkit Emberpaw Emberflame
Age: 15 moons
Gender: She-cat
Mate: None
Clan: Thunderclan
Rank: Medicine cat apprentice
Appearance: She is a fiery color with amber eyes
Personality: She is a kind cat that is super smart and remembers everything and any thing she sees, hears, smells, touches, and or tastes. She is not afraid to speak her mind and loves to help cats in need.
Skills: She is good at finding herbs, has a good sense of smell, has a good eye sight, and she has a great connection with Starclan
Flaws: She hates fighting and people getting hurt. Sense she is a  medicine cat, everyone has grown far from her.
History: Starclan gave her the ability to remember anything and everything. This is a very good thing but she has one memory she wishes to forget.
Family:
Mother: Duskcry-4 adoption!: https://warriorcatroleplay.forumotion.co.uk/t96-duskcry-thunderclan-queen
Father: Firebark-4 adoption!: https://warriorcatroleplay.forumotion.co.uk/t97-firebark-tunderclan-warrior
Sisters: Falconshine-4 adoption!: https://warriorcatroleplay.forumotion.co.uk/t98-falconshine-thunderclan-warrior
Dawnshine-4 adoption!: https://warriorcatroleplay.forumotion.co.uk/t99-dawnshine-thunderclan-warrior
Brothers: Rainstorm-4 adoption!: https://warriorcatroleplay.forumotion.co.uk/t100-rainstorm-thunderclan-warrior
Ravensweep-4 adoption!: https://warriorcatroleplay.forumotion.co.uk/t101-ravencall-thunderclan-warrior

Missing several vital points from the cat creation form.

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